Poems I wrote Enjoy!

[CajunMan]

I wrote these for my Gf and for various other reasons but I thought I could share them tell me what yall think most think they are pretty good but go ahead and tell me what yall think.

1) I feel....

I feel....
Depressed
Repressed
Unnerved

I can't fight this feeling I hide.

I feel....
Lied to
Crushed
Strangled

No longer is there time to bide.

I feel....
like hitting the wall
like breaking the nearest thing
like being ignored is fine

I push away all others this chosen side.

I feel....

like before
like over again
like I will soon after

Happens all the time hid by a smile a laugh and false viel I smiled.


2) How you Remind me.

Its been a while since this feeling.
Its been forever in time I became so reeling.
Backing away from what we've made.
The only dreams left to fade.

Your eyes show me my past and all I knew.
That is how you remind me.
Your smile shows me my present when its there I feel amasing.
That is how you remind me.

When I see you with someone but me it makes me scream.
Since the only time I can is but a passing dream.
Fading glances so close in feeling so far in distance.
Time heals all wounds tough my skin has become everlasting resistance.


Your words make me feels so good if only you would tell me more.
That is how you remind me.
The thought of you feeling happy because of me is better than any feeling.
That is how you remind me.

I'm trying my best to make you happy every chance I claim.
I was wondering a favor could you do the same.
I ask alot I know but I could really use the feeling.
The time without you my skin feels as if its peeling.

I try as hard as I can even though I might not need to.
That is how you remind me.
I never thought I'd feel this way about anyone.
That is how you remind me.

Thats how you remind me.


3) Internal Bleeding

I can't describe the feeling inside.
I feel crushed I feel dead a strange uprise.
My throught has filled with liquid making it hard to breathe.
Something down my face sedume I find a tear.

What have I done who am I to guess?
Tangled and Quarled in such of a mess.
I thought I was now free from feeling this way?
You were all that kept the beast at bay.

To whom do I loan my feelings?
To whom wishes to have them?
Could you take them would you want to?
I know I wouldn't I'm too much trouble.

For ever I love you more and more.
This tear from out my soul it tour.
Tell me that you'll never leave.
Never again can I concieve.

My fall to pieces held only by you.
But do you want to?
Tell me the truth and do you think I do?
Or am I the only one who.....
 

[aliasalian122]

emo
 

[CajunMan]

Lol shut up I'm very alternative!!!!